Ok !!!! Here’s my attempt at the 55er !!! HOWZAAT !!!!


 Sr and Sh in their room


Behind closed doors


There comes a vroooom


Ma hears loud voices


With concern opens the door


Only to see


Sr and Sh on the floor


In the centre is the radio


Screaming to the whole world


All of them laugh together aloud !!!



A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:

Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)

A setting, One or more characters, Some conflict, and A resolution.

(Not limited to moral of the story)

25 Replies to “55er”

      1. aankh maare o ladki aankh maare..

        Me : Thank God !! You wrote something, Hitch !!! Otherwise, comment section will be filled with smilies !!!! 🙂
        Stop pulling my leg….And tell, howz the 55er ???


  1. I am suddenly feeling very old. What in heavens name is a 55er?? I do not know how to post a frown (another sign of feeling old). Otherwise, I would have.


  2. Don’t break your head on the above comment. I was practicing a frown. Then as I tried to post, I got this message from wordpress : “You are posting comments too quickly. Slow down.”

    Suddenly I don’t feel so old! So here is a smiley 😀


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